HORIZONDr. Manoj Singh[1]
I see herstooping downtowards my earthI feel my armsraised abovetowards her skyalaswhy don't we meetwhere is our horizon
[2]
tilted , her sky
tilted , her sky
shaking, my earth
distant, our horizon
Natasha Aka. Rashi
At the fringe of my life.
At its edge..
the horizon
of things past
and yet to come.
the horizon
of love's rise
and my fall?
the horizon
of life's doubts
and my lust..
the horizon
of the wished
and the recieved!
Sandeep A. Hemnani
Horizon ...I know it as the limit to one’s capacities...One’s dreams!
I told ‘her’ I can get her the stars,She laughed it away.
I told ‘her’ I could move the earth for her,She laughed it away.I reminded her that ‘she’ was my inspiration... my reason to live!She laughed it away.I begged ‘her’ to let me touch ‘her’ once,She laughed it away.I gazed into ‘her’ smiling eyes and sobbed for joy,She laughed it away.I surrendered myself... told ‘her’ I was ‘her’ slave...She laughed it away.I told ‘her’ I could weep for joy if she called my name,She laughed it away.I confessed that I feel incomplete without ‘her’,She laughed it away.
I wept for hours... sobbed myself to sleep...She laughed it away.
I told ‘her’ “I miss you”She laughed it away.
I told ‘her’ “I LOVE YOU”She laughed it away...
What else could she do???
I could barely see her laughing from my tear filled eyes...
How limited my horizon was...
Limited to just one photograph.......
9 comments:
horizon is an äpparent"meeting.in love n life,v rarely have horizons that match.thats y v compromise:) but even thats fun.in love.well written !!
I always believed It was the meeting of earth and sky. That it is not real never came to my mind. Well said Sweta. and thanks for your comments
That was very well written Sandeep, I could feel your tears and see her laughing away!!
kuch samaz mein nahi aaya........................... :-(
hey thanks mks... hope to keep expressing myself in a similar fashion regularly :)
try again gari... it ain't that difficult after all ;)
Hi everyone, tnx for the comments n comliments.
tnx Shweta for understanding what i was tryin to express..
do look out for the next word everyone..
...tc
Ok lets c....three so diff interpretations....makes u wonder the complexity of the human mind...
Dok Saab: "Distant, our horizon" a true tale of love lost...of need in our hearts...of the wishes that never die..... wow...
Sandeep: Dude ...complicated, not the write up but ur thoughts while wrting this.... but lovely...im sure it reminded everyone of thier first crush.....TOUCHE...
Rashi: confused...
everyone keep wrtin n commentin.....
Regards..
WOW!TRULY SPLENDID....
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